Bang the trees started falling down. Rain was pouring down and lightning struck the ground. The thunder was as loud as a roaring lion. Trees were falling down and I was trapped in my house. The house was creaky and noisey. Me and my brother James were upset, there were no parents, Not even our sister Jessie. Someone knocked on our door. It creaked open and no one was there. We were very freaked out. We were even under the bed. There were foot steps and creaky noises. We heard a door knock again. We were even more scared.

I’d love to see the end of my story.